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  Topic Name: Mud and Biryani - 2 nights on the South Downs Way on: September 02, 2014, 01:08:54 PM
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« on: September 02, 2014, 01:08:54 PM »

Two nights bikepacking across the lush green hills of the chalky South Downs. There was a bit of mud and a biryani.
http://www.farawayvisions.com/mud-and-biryani-netley-to-amberley/
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  Topic Name: Mud and Biryani - 2 nights on the South Downs Way Reply #1 on: September 12, 2014, 03:41:45 PM
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« Reply #1 on: September 12, 2014, 03:41:45 PM »

Very nice post!

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  Topic Name: Mud and Biryani - 2 nights on the South Downs Way Reply #2 on: September 18, 2014, 01:59:31 AM
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« Reply #2 on: September 18, 2014, 01:59:31 AM »

Thank you Bikiba. Was there anything you found particularly good? I'd love to know as it helps keep the writing interesting.
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  Topic Name: Mud and Biryani - 2 nights on the South Downs Way Reply #3 on: September 19, 2014, 03:30:22 PM
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« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2014, 03:30:22 PM »

1. Humor was nice
2. I like the paragraphs separated by pix
3. Less pix of your guys butt. 😊
4. I would have loved to see more maps, gear, how you packed the bikes ....

Was very enjoyable and I shared it with my wife.

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  Topic Name: Mud and Biryani - 2 nights on the South Downs Way Reply #4 on: September 25, 2014, 12:05:41 AM
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« Reply #4 on: September 25, 2014, 12:05:41 AM »

Thanks bikiba. That feedback is really helpful.

I'll get Maps uploaded for future rides and close ups of the packing. On blogs about other trips there are shots of the bike packed so I tend to think that more pics of that might bore the reader. But it seems not, so watch out for improvements in that department.

I always seem to be behind, hence the pics of 'your guys butt.' Someone else mentioned that too so once I made it my business to get shots of my butt instead. http://www.farawayvisions.com/singlespeed-equals-happiness/

Cheers. :-)

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  Topic Name: Mud and Biryani - 2 nights on the South Downs Way Reply #5 on: September 25, 2014, 03:36:33 AM
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« Reply #5 on: September 25, 2014, 03:36:33 AM »

😊 definitely better butt pic.

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